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Poseyfly Face Icon

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My first icon of poseyfly ^^
EDIT - I really enjoy critiques and opinions on my art, I do. But please for the love of celestia do any other piece of work i did! I do enjoy having feedback but not on the same thing 100 times. I would appreciate if people actually did pieces that mattered to me. My main purpose is not making icons so I couldn't care less about this icon. Plus the fact i made this some time ago. Thanks
EDIT (AGAIN ) - Disabling critiques because apparently no one reads descriptions any more.
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:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Vision:Well,I can see it good,and it's not smooth.Eye pupils are looking on two different sides.I don't know is that because of your OC or something else.

Originality:First,Two lines on closed eyes are not used in MLP,but however,second,0CT0PISS is right,you should draw hair.I have not looked at the title I would not get it that this is not Pinkie.

Tehnique:This is baddest side of the icon.You used MS paint.Okay.It's hard to do on MS paint BUT this is not justification.
I'm totally sure that you can do much Much MUCH better than this.
You used 3 colors for this.I think that blinking pony icon is totally okay for avatar,but NOT and this.This can't be named "Pony blink".
There's no name for this easy!

Impact:No,no....no impact.


If you really want,use this for avatar.But I would not do it on your place.I would be ashamed if I did this.I won't be mean rude or something but this is truth.You did not take time on this as you know that you can.If I would do an icon like this,on my place it would took 1 minute.Or No.30 seconds.
This is not bad work but I know that you can lot of better than this.Poor icon.I know you may will be sad because of this but,this is just a lesson for you.If you want to be proud on yourself,you need to take time on your image.

Hope that you understand me.

Jade~